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First Love

Young naivete Believed love was forever Dreams of the future Burst by heartless rejection Callous immaturity First love's harsh demise - A true blessing in disguise Revealed by hindsight Kim Merryman 10/6/11 for Russell Sivey's Relationship Breakups contest

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:40:00 AM
Congrats on being featured Kim. Yes breakups are hard and your poem expresses it nicely. love phyl
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Date: 10/22/2011 12:15:00 AM
what a great way to say it, Kim, and I see you won with this. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/13/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kim. Sorry to be late to comment. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2011 12:42:00 AM
KIM, CONGRATULATIONS ;-) ~ IN Russell Sivey, CONTEST.. GREAT ENTRY,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
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Date: 10/8/2011 11:28:00 PM
Kim, excellent write, and very true. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:16:00 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win with this wonderful poem------Lori
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Date: 10/8/2011 2:04:00 PM
I love the last three lines Kim, perfect ending!! congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;) - Wilma
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