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First Love

The emptyness inside The tears that I cry The words that he said The screaming in my head The pain that I feel It's way too real The sad look in my eye There's no more sparkle inside There's nothing left to do Except stop loving you I don't think that's what I want to do Bcuase I'll never stop loving you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/1/2009 1:24:00 PM
normal. compleatly normal. the phase going along at a normal pace. jhl
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Date: 1/23/2009 1:12:00 PM
i like this piece. i can image the feeling your expressing in it, almost feel it myself. very nice job :)... Livy p.s hope you find the " sparkle inside" with someone you love.
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