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First Date

FIRST DATE oh wow! she’s prettier than i thought dressed to kill i suddenly look like a tramp smell like one too not sure whether or not to hold hands neither is she but at last it’s done a wet clammy experience troubled about the good night kiss my first date oh hell take a shot they say eskimos do it that way too saying goodnight this urgent call to nature wouldn’t you know it sphinx like the whole date she suddenly wants to talk Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/3/2015 12:56:00 PM
first dates are always pulling at nerves, a fun read:)
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:17:00 AM
I love your sense of humor my friend. Yes! you captured that awkward moment just the way I remember it. lol.
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Date: 8/18/2015 4:25:00 PM
oh my... AW KWARD!!! Hey, DAver, you wrote this on the 16th? That was joe's and my 40th anniversary!! How interesting you posted a first date poem on that day of importance for me!! I met my hubbie around this date as well and we married a whole year later.
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Date: 8/20/2015 10:59:00 AM
Happy belated 40th I wrote these a long time ago and am just getting around to posting. Love, Dave
Date: 8/18/2015 11:15:00 AM
the nervous, awkward moment of a first date.. we've all been there, dave... enjoyed your trip down memory lane... splendid piece..huggs
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Date: 8/16/2015 10:01:00 AM
First dates are never an easy experience Dave - great imagery in your poem:-) hugs jan xx
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