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Fire Flood

this hollow place, i fill with pain, when hollow floods, i drink the rain, cool and clear, it sooths the burn, and bottles my heart, inside this urn, i feel no need, to seek a way out, they'll bottle me up again, without a doubt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/7/2013 10:20:00 AM
A great Free -for-all winning poem. *CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write. have a great day, TA TA TA * Linda
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:00:00 AM
very nice........... skat
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Date: 7/3/2013 6:56:00 PM
Truly amazing. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 12/3/2012 12:19:00 PM
I love the first stanza "I drank the rain" very symbolic. Nice work on the piece.
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