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Fire and Ice

` ` ` on fire … with a silken face bouncing gently in the bath of combed sunlight, her eyes open like a newborn rose sprinkled by drips of honeyed laughter; the sheer mist floats into a world where robins wing around her feet, as if to chase a meadow filled with morning coffee scent… and she feels the natural brightness of people humming violin tunes inside her head; how she loves with arms knitting tender flames , a slow fire in the rush of breaths flowing in cool breeze: lungs floating in and out between the piety of her bones…she rambles along greeting everyone she meets with a soft smile.
fire on ice… she taste the tears of both wrath and liberation, flowing down the sunken river in a hazy blur; until she hears a voice,” rock –a-bye, baby girl” silencing herself, unaware of her twin lives, for her eyes cannot see the difference between another time, another place where elements of fire and ice cannot blend.
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for Yasmin Khan’s Dr.Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:43:00 AM
Got goosebumps reading this, superb write and win . Congrats nette. Love...
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Date: 3/9/2012 10:15:00 AM
Nette congrats on your superb win, violet eyes of evil, love it..David
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Date: 3/9/2012 9:25:00 AM
congrats Nette luv on a stupendous first place win for this dramatic and intensely famtastic write luv.. such marvelous lines .. happy weekend..luv..
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:56:00 AM
Nette, Great imagery and feeling. Congrats. Jay
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Date: 3/9/2012 7:29:00 AM
[piety of her bones] very elegant turn of phrase..evocative as always Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Yasmin's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 2:51:00 PM
This sure is a write of extremes Nette... if this was me i would not know which way to turn..! best wishes re-winning..
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:41:00 PM
Reads like a winner in this contest..Great idea for the competition..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Had Karter again today..He is precious..Growing by leaps and bounds..I have completed Hush Thoughts..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2012 12:37:00 PM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Nette. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:28:00 AM
I was here Nette: I enjoyed your beautiful free verse, thanks for recent comment. Agape, Mose
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:24:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your kind comments on my poetry. I enjoyed reading yours today. Have a wonderful day and please continue sharing your poetry Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/22/2012 8:21:00 AM
Excellent!Your are a talented poet with an exceptional style,Nette
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Date: 2/22/2012 7:25:00 AM
What lines [lungs floating in and out between/the piety of her bones] oouuuLala [mocking all the way down to the marrow] seeing bits of me here too sorry to say [fret] excellent nette way better than mine ;) Light & Love
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Date: 2/22/2012 1:22:00 AM
Wery good Nette....luck to you in contest! Bravo. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/22/2012 12:58:00 AM
Let me sleeeeeep again......
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Date: 2/22/2012 12:57:00 AM
You have penned a captivating story on the theme of the contest Nettie.....Love it.Wish u good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/22/2012 12:54:00 AM
My mobile wake me up..........
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