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The heart is another fire, in which it could burn forever, water can kill one evaporating ashes of life The air of the one, the breath of one The finale is gone: soulless Hold the fire very close And be afraid of the wind Extinguishing could be glorious A light casts over when the heart is gone And the trees grow higher than ever Yet lying there oddly You musn't reignite the flame Or extinguish it with water before Over you is a cloud of smoke Your heart burns brighter than ever No one must extinguish it Never

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/4/2015 11:33:00 PM
Zee, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/4/2015 12:08:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Zee. I'm also new here. Glad to read your first poem. You'll surely enjoyx it here like I do. Khrysstine x
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Date: 6/3/2015 11:33:00 PM
Zee, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/3/2015 10:24:00 PM
A terrific fist submission, Zee. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll enjoy sharing and reading with all of us other like-minded souls. Have fun. Regards, Viv
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