Fire

When the phone rang the other day It made me laugh, I let my mind play I had to stop and check the date I heard every word in an even toned way I felt your words were over played And yea I guess I fell in love the same I clearly recall the time I saw you last Let me stop here and say I appoligze for that The way I behaved a sinister fillet You had every reason to be irrate Listening to your every word blammed Lost in a world severly inflammed

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/9/2015 11:47:00 AM

Dear Courtney, I'm glad you liked my goodie candy poetry, It was delicious project to do for the up coming holiday of Easter, next to Halloween it's the tastiest of holidays if you asked me, now I love the honesty of your your poem, it shows alot of emotional depth to it, you put your theme forward and achieve it very well, enjoyed it cheri

Courtney Courtney
Date: 3/10/2015 2:12:00 AM

thanks it's short but sweet