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Fine Spirits

Words can be the flame that burn through your emotions your heart may be in pain as the words become more inurbane People might never be the same after some traumatic event their behaviour may become capricious and they may drown their sorrows in the bottle Their malignant nature will alienate many of their friends They'll gravitate towards "fine spirits", their actions will often offend Everyone will become their scapegoat the fault will never be theirs - ..Perhaps a transitory period of sobriety can dissipate our fears and the truth will become perspicuous for it is not meant to flatter Maybe then, they'll see the light. ~---~ 9/9/16

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Date: 9/18/2016 5:50:00 AM
So true...esp those who fall to alcohol...Well penned. Congrats. :)
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Date: 9/17/2016 3:39:00 PM
Great write Joseph, thanks for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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Joseph May
Date: 9/17/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thank you for my placement John
Date: 9/16/2016 6:28:00 PM
Poetry can heal what alcohol and drugs never could. I am thankful that I have become addicted to writing... A wise message comes through in these expressive lines. Great work, Joseph!
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Date: 9/13/2016 2:09:00 PM
Joseph, kudos for making a wonderful poem from the challenging words. They didn't speak to me and I just couldn't manage to write one. 7 ; )
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Date: 9/9/2016 11:07:00 AM
So true, Joseph. Happiness has never never found inside a bottle. A great write for sobriety!
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:13:00 AM
You hit the problem on the head, Joseph, (sometimes you have to hit them or ourselves on the head) and laid out so succinctly. Well done.
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