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Finding God

God is All of Us The “Grand Inquisitor” was I inside the grand Cathedral hatred’s chains and silenced screams chasing God from every cell. I cursed the bells, the rancid robes, a child’s now shattered golden globe alone, in fear of that called love, frightened eyes of wingless dove. An angel came, haloed beret, told me the church was stone that God’s extended hand is formed of willing skin and bone. So I left my hell that day and slowly learned to trust the hand of God that led the way for God is all of us. 8/6/2014 For Gail Angel Doyle contest – Finding God

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Date: 8/15/2014 11:59:00 AM
refreshing piece acknowledging God's presence, john..... sweet congrats and huggs
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John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2014 3:31:00 PM
Nette, I think I first had this thought after listening to the song that has the line "what if God was one of us". My quantum leap thinking process wonder: "What if God is all of us?"
Date: 8/14/2014 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Faye for you support.
Date: 8/13/2014 8:16:00 AM
Deep write in finding God..:) kudos!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2014 3:27:00 PM
I have been reminded many times that I should remember that he is not the one who is lost.
Date: 8/13/2014 7:16:00 AM
Brilliant take John !loved the way u tuk this challenge, Congrats on huge win!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Sharma. It is often not so much where I take the challenges as where the challenges take me.
Date: 8/13/2014 1:28:00 AM
Beautifully imAGERY with a nice flow of words, John. congrats
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John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2014 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Mehta for checking in.
Date: 8/12/2014 9:24:00 PM
This is a magnificent write!!! Congrats on your win!!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/15/2014 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Robert for your kind words.
Date: 8/12/2014 12:28:00 PM
- Congratulation on your winning poem in: "Finding God" - Contest - Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - Skillfully rhyme and beautifully written, John - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2014 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise.
Date: 8/12/2014 11:47:00 AM
stunning imagery - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2014 6:22:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 8/10/2014 8:15:00 AM
This is a gem. Adding this fine piece to my fav list this fine morn and appreciate the inspiration that it offers as well as the standard that it sets!
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John Lawless
Date: 8/12/2014 6:21:00 PM
Thanks Robert for checking in and commenting. God and I are still engaged in a running conversation.

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