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Finally

Break it down Break it all the way down Break it down to the point of no return Repeat Repeat Repeat Don't stop, I can take it Don't stop, I deserve it Don't stop, it is what it is Break it down Break it down until there is nothing left Now it's gone Now I'm gone Now I'm done Finally

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Date: 1/21/2015 12:06:00 PM
A powerful write, and it hot home. I love it and I hope you keep up the good work. -Tristin
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Charles D. Hill
Date: 9/22/2018 2:43:00 AM
Thank you! Glad to hear that. Let me know what you think of my new poem.
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Tristin Goodman
Date: 1/21/2015 12:06:00 PM
hit* Sorry, my phone isn't the brightest.

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