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Final Analysis

(Hidden pitfall; judging a Poetry Contest) I like to approach the final pass at morning sunrise, after a long restful renewal. This was not that morning; awake at 2:00 AM baking cookies by 7:30. On the fourth cup of java crispy peanut butter crunch wades across my tongue, floating downward in a warm, brown stream to settle in fat cells on waist and hips as the spoken words cross my lips.

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