Fighting

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~Fighting~ (Free Verse) Anything can ignite a fight It can take place anytime too It can be at home,work or school Try to avoid fights of any kind please Fights are not a healthy thing To be part of or go through No matter what you hear or read Fighting is really bad you see Fighting rarely brings good There's nothing postive about it If you ever get involved in one Get out and right away stop it We should try to avoid fights And of course never start one You should sow seeds of peace so you can Spread Christ's love and forgiviness too. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 February.07.2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/17/2015 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful words of truth. Fight destructs surely. The last four lines depict the truth. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/7/2015 3:33:00 PM

Good words of wisdom in this poem, Dorian. Fighting and anger can be so destructive to relationships. Good write!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 4:30:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Laura, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D " "

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/7/2015 10:44:00 AM

Yes, agree with you that fights always bring unpleasantness in our life. Good write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thank you so kindly Ravi, for stopping by and comments. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D " "