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Fiftieth Anniversary

jackolanturns grin atop rolls of dry fodder strains of music float all eyes watch the couple dance they see only each other ~//~ fine country setting whiffs of barbeque remain the chaffing dish warm old friends who now sipping wine reflect on their own journey ~//~ cake patiently waits two aged hands cut the first slice they sample with flare celebrating fifty years as each other’s only mate ~//~ quiet solitude the two gently reflecting when later alone yes, we have had a good life they exclaimed to each other ~//~ © Oct, 14 2010 For Amy's Tanka contest

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Date: 5/9/2012 8:51:00 PM
i love how you made this an anniversary poem. Fall of their lives and all that jazz. This is awesome, Charles. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:26:00 PM
Great work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 10:09:00 AM
Congrats Charles to u and Carolyn on celebrating a lovely and momentous time... just like Bob Hinshaw and Vera his lovely wife.. so admirable to see longevity in couples on the soup..hope Ron and I follow up with such good examples in marriage and poetry luv..
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