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Fiercely Trembled Quiver

'Twas a mystifying shiver, made her insides quivery liquid a flight of fancy such as none other, they were like two ships passing midst a steamy night's rendezvous, whenever the poetry of a drab life appears to be stagnant & oppressive, she reminisces an endearing epoch whence earth vehemently shook & in the way he made every last nuance of devoured flesh fiercely tremble to the core of her reawakened existence

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Date: 10/28/2016 7:28:00 AM
There is nothing more exhilarating than a fiercely trembled quiver, I know because I felt one as I read your poem today. Beautifully crafted Paloma, so much love and desires flows through your words.
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Paloma P
Date: 10/28/2016 11:55:00 AM
You're too sweet Chris! Thanks so much.
Date: 10/28/2016 3:47:00 AM
Wave that magic wand of yours Paloma, wave I see you waving!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/28/2016 4:42:00 AM
Laughing here, this is what happens when one can't sleep! Waving at you Rick. :)

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