Fickle Heart

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FICKLE HEART

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Firmly the bridles of a fickle heart should be held by loyalty, if we wish love to grow! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 24 August 2016

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Date: 9/22/2016 1:48:00 PM

So few words, to say so much.

Date: 9/10/2016 7:27:00 AM

Yes if the heart will be tamed for a bridle . If the heart is a horse then it going to be a rough ride. Your words stay with me.

Date: 8/30/2016 2:17:00 PM

Excellent thought we should follow.great write poet.

Date: 8/24/2016 1:47:00 PM

True not only but a way to make good. Genius as always. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Date: 8/24/2016 8:46:00 AM

So true!

Date: 8/24/2016 7:46:00 AM

- Loyalty !!! ..... Important words in this context, my friend - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 8/24/2016 5:34:00 AM

Very precious advisory conveyed through a beautiful monoku ...