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Fever Pitch

FEVER PITCH Demons of faith, God speed, Ageless tears, A dweller lost in the perfect Odyssey. Bricks of memories, barricade my way out. Growing gray within the ageless centuries. Steady rivers, at the pitch of one response. Times out, by the heat, and beauty. Tragedy is never a fear to announce. The drug that takes to cure, the world, ~ lost in a torn humanity. Harmless, results and tears ~ struck in every way, in the same day. Sneaky thoughts up my sleeve. I will leave, the envious of me, this you best believe, There is no way in... YET!! I found the perfect way out... Destroying demons, That get in my way.. Waking up in a dusty road. Unleashing every load. Today's a different day, still I wake up the same way. But, today life is reversed. I find myself with an endless thirst. Tossing me into a 700 degree level, I shine away from the path of the dust devil. Swirling all around, forbidden to enter my bound. Your pitch at me, a fever I want no more. Now I can see, the emptiness of the things inside of me. Now I can feel, my soul reaching out to heal. Breaking every cold sweat, Shivers, pneumonia a life of regrets. Withdrawals left behind. Symptoms, showing the fever is gone. God Speed* Into my life* by;p.d.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/23/2013 9:55:00 AM
Hi, ever dearest sis of mine! How are you? Hope you're doing well. Well, thanks God I'm finally back home. And, I'm so glad to stop by @ soup again and so grateful to read this outstanding piece of yours showing your superb extraordinary talent. i love this gem of yours so much. A fave! The great aspiration is very inspiring. Thank you so much for sharing my dearest sis! Many big big sweetest hugs to you! Good night & God bless! Wish you all the best esp this wkend! love lots 4ever, Leonora
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:11:00 PM
One can only wonder at all this pain and confusion and it is best to do as you do and let it out! Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2012 1:22:00 PM
Good going in this really positive write P D, real good to read ya'
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Date: 1/16/2012 5:32:00 PM
PD. I will post it probably tomorrow, the one for your collaboration contest. It will be advertisement for my daughter's novel! haha. It would be amazing if she got published!!
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Date: 12/21/2011 8:34:00 AM
Just dropped by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing this past year P.D. I have enjoyed reading your poetry and hope to be reading it for years to come. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 12:13:00 PM
When a poet writes from off the cuff. In a fevered pitch, it's quite enough. An ecclectic group of soulful thought. Is now telling a tale of a struggle fought.
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Date: 11/28/2011 12:02:00 PM
so tender and very deep,,,,,i really enjoyed this one,,,,you words are so powerfull,,,,and your talent stands as the sun,,,,shining its rays for everyone to enjoy....
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Date: 11/25/2011 7:09:00 PM
Well done, love your style. Reminds me of my own writing in my younger days...Kelli
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Date: 11/24/2011 8:57:00 AM
This poem reminds me of an inner struggle with the lines--now I see the emptiness----and--soul reaching out to heal--throwing life into a fevered pitch. Wishing you and your family a very Happy Thanksgiving. love phyl
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Date: 11/23/2011 9:06:00 PM
p.d. a cryptic write of many levels / dimensions. interesting since i just finished watching a program that says there are 11 dimensions, and perhaps we're in all of them, some seeking forgiveness, others giving it. i now ramble back to my own. thanks. ;-)
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:44:00 PM
great peice pd love the ending
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Date: 11/23/2011 2:38:00 PM
Deep, deep piece, PD. And full of emotion. Lovely write. Thanks very much - loved your contest : )
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Date: 11/23/2011 8:57:00 AM
your standards never faulter p.d, you are indeed amazing. harry
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Date: 11/22/2011 4:52:00 PM
Dark drama throughout this one. It has a timeless feeling of the situations that plague every generation. Wonderful verse so full of emotion! Luv, Elizabeth
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Date: 11/22/2011 8:27:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..What are your demons of faith?...I can see that by lines "Now I can see the emptines of the things inside of me" "Now I can see my soul reaching out to heal"..That you are working upon whatever it is that you have clung to in the past and now see is not the right way..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting upon my work..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2011 6:58:00 AM
sometimes it seems like there are demons and when they leave you they go to somewhere else. and these demons are so bad i cant tell you what they did. john
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Date: 11/22/2011 6:28:00 AM
This is filled with great adjectives and symbolism, PD. Always nice to visit your work! Gwendolen
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:26:00 PM
I think the title is very befitting this one and the dark atmosphere it created, Irma. How are things? I hope you hear from royal soon! soupmail.
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Date: 11/21/2011 9:13:00 PM
a funny dark poem' sandy
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:58:00 AM
You always spill the true you in your lines. A strange and strong lady. Have a nice day, P.D
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Date: 11/21/2011 7:33:00 AM
pd. your my hero
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Date: 11/21/2011 7:24:00 AM
This one, dear one, is extraordinary..nice it seems to go thru emotional upheavals occasionally ( joking only), ..it produces top class poetry..thanx for stopping by..when upset, writing is a release into peace, God bless, S.J
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Date: 11/21/2011 6:28:00 AM
Writing your world on paper does help... Wishing you much peace my poet friend. be strong hug from me to you...Michael
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:43:00 AM
* "Sooo Brilliantly Deep * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Linda * I Could Feel Your Beauty * Touching My Own Spirit * It Felt Sooo Beautiful * Yesss, I Do Know It ;-) Completely Compelling This Joyful Fascinating Poem * A Fave Brushed In Soulfelt Splendours * My Luv, Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:38:00 AM
Fantastic write Linda...go to see you writing your troubles out...I write so my demons don't eat me...hugs and kisses today...luv shannon
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:40:00 AM
Man I'm off on my writing today...you know I meant 'good' to see you writing...xoxo
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