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Fetal Prayer /Nepal 2003

Beneath the comforter curled, fetal, praying; within the sacred orange of stucco robed walls, students of Buddhism huddled kitten like laying; while sound ricochets rattles down the red tile halls. Liberty shakes the panes, lights the cobalt sky. Sirens upon the rubble of imperial dreams, strew refuse, ply. Primary colored prayer flags wave brazenly as the riots ooze. Saffron incense mixes with the poison of citronella smoke loose. The pallets pon planks shake novitiates like dies in a rattle. Outside, down alleys, through flowered vines; Nepali’s battle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/5/2009 8:33:00 AM
this work will definetely inspire people to act against war on humanity wherever it occurs... good work... congrats
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Date: 3/30/2009 8:27:00 AM
All I can say is.... fantastic ! extremely well portrayed.... with first hand eyes.
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Date: 3/18/2009 8:41:00 AM
What powerful symbol you have made the comforter, the fetal imagery ties up into gordion bundle of incredible writ.
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Date: 3/14/2009 2:11:00 PM
Debbie this is such a deeply moving write. The visuals are keen. It must be horrible to live that way. It makes me thankful that I am where I am. Awesome work my talented friend! Love Ya, Robin
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Date: 3/13/2009 8:59:00 PM
This is a sad write bringing to light the pain and suffering of the innocent in war. You write with such heart and emotion. Amazing talent bleeds from your soul. You are an inspiration to many. You challenge us to reach deep within and bring out our very best. Thank you for your kind words, I am truly honored to have you read my work. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/13/2009 2:06:00 PM
You are completely awesome. So much knowledge and wisdom in your life, expressed so exceptionally well in your poetry. I sense a conversation with you would be deeply enlightening and so interesting. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/13/2009 12:05:00 PM
wow-- very well done
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