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Fertile Crescent, I

Fertile Crescent The feeling of the sun, overshadowing My morality, my righteousness That sun over my left should, Threatening to tinge me if I pontificate platitudes that Fail to connect me to a Full stomach for my baby, Solid comfort during my elders’ aging And respite needs That McChrystal was sacrificed at the altar, The way Abraham (*pause) to show faith O yea, my ancient ancestors from Ireland Maybe they had roots in Celtic lore Heralding Beowulf’s heroics And maybe they had someone in some way connected

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Date: 9/10/2013 10:37:00 AM
ha ha ha I love your comment on my Alice poem :-)... please post another poem ;-) Linda
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Date: 9/10/2013 2:12:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Jen ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jen Franks
Date: 9/13/2013 5:05:00 PM
Thanks for your warm welcome. I enjoy your poetry :)
Date: 9/9/2013 8:55:00 PM
Jen, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * ...
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Jen Franks
Date: 9/13/2013 5:06:00 PM
Thanks for writing to welcome me. I hope you write often and that you are patient while I learn how this site works!
Date: 9/9/2013 5:09:00 PM
An epic write Jen, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jen Franks
Date: 9/13/2013 5:07:00 PM
It is requiring the research of an epic, that's for sure! Thanks for your warm welcome and comments, I can't wait to read your work!

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