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Feels So Right

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Feels So Right

Her body is the canvas for my inspiration.
I feel that great whoosh of numbness, 
As if my whole body fits in her warm 
Hand like a bird. Do you know that feeling?

She is shaking all over from the excitement.
Her eyes are luring me into her soul.
The feeling of forbidden fruit yet
Tasty and tempting is so compelling.

Her movements and motions have a way
Of letting me experience how fragile she is.
Does she realize how she touches me?
Her lips of satin caress my whole body.

Her fingertips on my face melts my heart.
She lets me know by her touch how
She feels. Do you know that feeling?
I need her soft senses to share my emotions.

I want to hold her close as if to never let go, 
Her skin pressed against me tightly. 
Lie still, and close your eyes girl, 
So lovely, so stunning, it feels so right.

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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 7:08:00 AM
    Hi Maggie, this was a great write. Sensual and engaging. Enjoyed it! Thanks for the congrats too :-)

  1. Date: 6/2/2011 10:14:00 AM
    Is there a new moon or what? Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Maggie. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/1/2011 3:04:00 PM
    I feel the same for my wife, Thats why I love this poem so much. Please checkout som of my work. tell me what you think.