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Feelings Now Stolen

Where was my awareness when your feelings unraveled? Was love’s presence always false or lost as days traveled? My heart feels deep-chilled from constant shivers. Numb emotions forbid me to react. All once known has become strangely abstract. My fried self is now an ache and quiver. I wish merely to float gone down river, Far away from your admissions impact. warm familiar truth securing dreams heart-anchored - - - drowned with love in stealth darkness feelings now stolen mock my heart's passion parade - - - words maimed my treasured love state
... CayCay October 1, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/28/2016 2:37:00 PM
Fantastic write. Gut wrenchingly sad.
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Date: 10/23/2016 8:59:00 AM
Excellent wok, CayCay..."My fried self.." says a lot, doesn't it? Wish I had thought of that. Heartiest congratulations..Larry
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Date: 10/23/2016 2:35:00 AM
dear CayCay , this is so sad...wonderful write:) Congratulations on your sweet win!//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:29:00 PM
Very good, CayCay, congratulations on your win :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/22/2016 10:53:00 AM
wow CayCay! the rhyming is amazing, I knew this was a winner the second I read it well done lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :) -luloo
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Date: 10/11/2016 6:45:00 PM
wow, this is so poignant and sad. love it
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Date: 10/10/2016 6:22:00 AM
There is sadness in the words, but the words are good! Nice job CayCay! MC
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:34:00 PM
CayCay, I forgot to wish you happy birthday today! I posted a poem to help you celebrate your special day, the same one I posted at the blog, but many members don't have the time to read blogs which is why I posted it. I wish you a most glorious birthday on this October 3rd. I hope that nasty storm doesn't cause harm to your area. Love, Connie
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/4/2016 7:31:00 PM
Sweetie - how can you say you forgot my bd when in fact you made my bd the extra-special day it was? I spent today with my Mom and told her all about my bratty-dear-heart friend. Some rain, but nothing drastic. Love to you ... CayCay
Date: 10/3/2016 3:28:00 PM
Wow CayCay that second stanza really hits home for the situation my sweet daughter is in right now. Your Poems are tailored to perfection! Superb! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/1/2016 5:13:00 PM
graceful in its sullen tone, cay...this gem weaves on as if it were not three forms!..much enjoyed, birthday girl!..huggs
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Date: 10/1/2016 1:41:00 PM
Sad but poignant. An excellent write.
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Date: 10/1/2016 12:29:00 PM
Oh so sad CayCay - the couplet packs a powerful punch that others can relate to - that the partner's feelings are the last thing on their mind when a relationship is failing... especially if someone is being unfaithful:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:16:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest CayCay...
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