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Feeling Down

I'm feeling down, &&' I'm already on the ground. I cant get any lower, my patience is getting slower. I've already hit the floor, &&' I'm becoming sore. I'm not sure where I went wrong, but now I dont belong. I'm like the unknown, all alone. This feeling is unbarable, the pain is unbelievable. I'm ready to walk out the door, I can't take no more. This is why I don't trust, I always get pushed in the dust. Now I got to cover my eyes, &&' ignore all your lies. I've been left in the rain, I've felt the pain. I knew things were wrong, but I stayed along. Now I'm here all alone, waiting for the sound of my phone. I wouldn't wish for my worst enemy to feel this way, that's what I have to say. I didn't really have a choice, now I'm missing the sound of your voice. I made mistakes that wont fade, not even with a blade. My heart isn't bullet proof, &&' that's the truth.

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  1. Date: 8/4/2013 12:57:00 AM
    cold as ice, this is not nice, don't pay the price, for someone else lies! ! Needy I say more Kirst?

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Don't feel sad i feel bad for you.Don't wait around for someone to call when you say that you cannot bear them at all.Anyway's i hope you feel better and find that special someone to help you to Recover from cedric p.s. keep away from that blade

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 8:34:00 PM
    K Mc., I hope you are feeling better. It is hard to miss some one who hurts you. Keep away from the blade, and writing does help. hope to read a happy poem from you soon...xox...Linda