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February Snow

The snowdrops pop their heads out of the ground The earth has thawed so they'll just look around Just when they think its safe Snow gets dumped on their face As winter sneaks back in without a sound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/21/2012 7:13:00 PM
hmmm, I just saw the comment below here. I don't get it. your 3rd line is already fine.
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Francine Roberts
Date: 2/21/2012 9:30:00 PM
yes I liked it so I left it alone,the rhyme might not be dead on but it was close enough
Date: 2/21/2012 7:12:00 PM
oh, this is GREAT, I see someone has been practicing limericks!!!
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Date: 2/1/2012 12:06:00 PM
Good write Francine. Just a suggestion: In order to make the third and fourth lines rhyme better, how about changing the third line to "They think it's a safe place"? It's your work. What do you think?
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Francine Roberts
Date: 2/1/2012 12:14:00 PM
nah, I'm going to leave it , if it were for a contest I would be pickier about the rhyme

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