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**A Sweet Waltz** As I kissed her lips tasting her candy glaze she bended ever so slowly for a little of this mayonnaise. And I said arise baby, don't stay in that stance. stand up, we'll embrace and start this love dance. A freestyle by a dear friend of mine who gave me permission to post this. I hope you all enjoy. Please, he wants to hear your opinion.... He will be reading..... Samuel Brooks 1/19/2010 "Chocolate WoW."

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Date: 2/17/2014 9:00:00 AM
I love the sweet Waltz, Chocolate WOW! Mmmmm, all day. Thanks for the visit on my blog.
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Date: 1/22/2010 4:52:00 AM
This is more than cute! This is hot!
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Date: 1/21/2010 12:41:00 PM
It's a cute poem!!
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Date: 1/20/2010 6:31:00 AM
Well the words of this poem inspired me to just post The Art of Making Love for u to read and your friend too.. so we all inspire each other with themes especially in the LUV department... especially sensual write.. enjoyed.. my kinda poetry... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/20/2010 6:29:00 AM
I like the reference to mayonnaise!!! This is a hot poem...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/20/2010 12:34:00 AM
Very romantic images Jp.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 1/19/2010 9:57:00 AM
Jared, thanks for posting this for Samuel. I enjoyed the romance in this write very much and hope Samuel becomes part of the Soup Family. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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