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Feast of the Red Roses

One day I sat here dreaming In my mind for what to draft As she lay there in my studio This artist began to craft This is what I seen As I pictured her this way For conclusion of my efforts They will get a chance to play I started with her ankles Using chocolate for the stems Working to her heaven Making a birds nest with her mane Half way up her Torso The chocolate touch with green Continuance of the stems Like I pictured in my dreams Around her upper torso To her shoulders and her breasts Crafted with coloured icing This put me to the test Texture with awesome creases Took shape from their stems The picture that was forming Would excite many men Filling in the voids With leaves and chocolate thorns From my beautiful naked maiden A garden of roses formed In beautiful scarlet red En captured with her curves This 3D shaped body canvas My love for her purely serves So many hours of crafting You should see my maiden now Like a bed of roses Listening to Bon Jovi now Now my task is over A picture for posterity For it's time to do some gardening My darling maiden and me http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/3/2009 4:38:00 PM
This is simply put beautiful! Your talent is incredible! Deb
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Date: 7/24/2009 12:43:00 PM
masterpiece of poetry art and romance--great write--and Bon Jovi is great,love him too---charma
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Date: 7/20/2009 2:46:00 PM
Very nice, um, but why is it on here twice or am I going crazy? Oh yeah thanks for the compliment you gave my sister Illyanna, calling her "Wes Craven" was probably the BESTEST compliment ANYONE could give her. I love her twisted mind, hee hee. Again, great write.....Aleera
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:39:00 PM
this is stunning! thanks for your comments and what did you mean about me being featured?
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Date: 7/20/2009 6:16:00 AM
wow,.."THIS" is a painting with words I'd love to see on canvas James !!! GREAT POETRY MY FRIEND !!! james
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:58:00 PM
Ha! James, you were painting some garden roses, Right! Lol, God bless, Moses! THANKS FOR THE CONGRATULATION!
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:02:00 PM
Like this one. A chocolate rose and icing sounds very enticing. I don't know how long the canvas would last though but in fantasy forever. Sara
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