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Blackberries ripen Fat field mice feast upon them Leaner times ahead Contest : One Haiku Contest Unplaced

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2011 3:57:00 AM

a well done haiku,, Nick,... how about them field mice... enjoyed,..p.d

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2011 2:00:00 PM

tag, you're it, nick.. got more?? thanks for coming around..:) huggs, nette

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/4/2011 11:26:00 AM

Love the imagery of those field mice feasting on blackberries. Nice haiku. Thanks for your comments ~ Sharon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2011 6:53:00 AM

what a stunning study on conrast, nick.. superb! winning streaks if for a contest. come visit?? :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet

Date: 6/28/2011 8:27:00 AM

Very nice imagery here....enjoyed.Thanks for visiting my Poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 5:24:00 AM

thankxx Nick..and that was only till I was 25 .. now am on life number three ..like a cat almost.. with new hubby but so much in between would take a book which I am working on.. so happy u enjoyed a small piece of my life.. it was and is beautiful.. always enjoy your work my friend..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 4:30:00 AM

We like to think life will get easier in the future. Feel like one of thos "field mice," Nick. Seizing the moment whilewe can. Very thought-provoking haiku. Love, Carolyn

David Williams

Date: 6/28/2011 4:25:00 AM

thanks for your words Nick, i still fish there to this day and often see field mice eating blackberries so nice link here. David.

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/27/2011 2:33:00 PM

Nice haiku here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 formula which is al to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:37:00 AM

Very good one..Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..I hope that your sun comes through the clouds today and shines warmly upon your face with just the correct tempertature..Thanks for the kind review...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/24/2011 10:10:00 AM

Lovely haiku with nice expressions , Nick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 8:49:00 AM

feeling economic crunch Nick.. lovely Haiku and title my friend.. expressive and imaginative as well luv..

Cory Long

Date: 6/24/2011 4:42:00 AM

I love blueberries, this was a nicely written haiku..cory