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Fearless Bee

What a world to see by a fearless me I am just a lonely bee forgotten from creation, a lost voice in the woods remains unseen. No more honey; dead flowers yet speak. Only if i could push the swing, a little further i would reach. The shortness of the robes leaves freedom a mystery. Trapped on a yellow star, watching the wind blowing alive far green. out of breath, sacrificed my wings for loneliness. waking up became an awaiting dream. foggy existence sets my soul free, declaring a free-will acting ability. doubting this destiny to speak truth to me, echoing lies is daring fear. perhaps i'll stay around here, another night of a fearless bee.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:24:00 PM

Rafoof, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2016 2:36:00 AM

Rafoof, welcome to poetry soup... skat

Rafoof Mwais
Date: 6/21/2016 12:24:00 AM

Thanks sweetie :)