Fear

HAIKU #12,024-12,027 (c) 12/23/14 Fear opens the door that shows us where courage blooms when we chase off gloom. Fear is never foul it faces the enemy and melts frozen hearts Fear tosses the key that could lead us into view sanctuary blue. *

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/30/2014 10:46:00 AM

Wow Queen of Haiku! Do you know God provides you this name" Iris" for a good reason?Iris is a circular structure in the eye controlling the diameter and size of the pupil and thus the amount of light reaching the retina. Just put "word" in place of "light"--perfect quality for a haiku writer. About the flower(Iris) you know very well.God bless you Iris. Wish you and your family a very prosperous 2015.---Your friend RAJAT

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 1/2/2015 7:18:00 AM

Rajat, Aahhh, You're delightfully encouraging cast a smile across my heart, you warmed thank you, my friend, for your poetic treat served on platinum platter. Blessings now and beyond.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/23/2014 3:42:00 PM

lovely string of haiku i especially love the final one:-) Hugs jan xx

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 12/24/2014 8:33:00 PM

Thanks Jan. right back to your wonderful collection may you be blessed now and beyond... namaste!