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Fear

In the fifties leaders told an innocent trusting populace to duck and cover. Years later they felt so foolish for the easy way they let their fears be strummed. It had worked so well that with ignorance and forgetfulness that goes with time, and the arrogance that goes with power, and a populace drained of will, and hyped by televised fears, many rushed out to buy duct tape. Now in a land birthed in religious freedom we argued over mosques while desperate matters are left unresolved. Somewhere in this land a jackass is braying.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/16/2016 9:44:00 PM
Political pieces are so hard to write as the reader won't always agree. That said, I think this is a well-written piece. Although it appears you are saying that people's fears are hyped, not justified. Interesting point of view. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/16/2016 11:28:00 AM
You have a viewpoint here and a moral point of view; but it ends too quickly. You need to expand the last verse into the same cadence that you had in the first three stanzas. You have set up the reader and then it comes to an end too abruptly. "Now in a land..." needs to be augmented with more versus/stanzas before the jackass line can have any sting. It needs more balance on the back end. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 1/16/2016 12:10:00 AM
Awesome you captured it all in just a few lines, sarcastic, witty, and very true.. Well done
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Date: 1/15/2016 10:25:00 AM
'Religious freedom..' nice sarcasm seems just for the chosen few... well written
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:33:00 PM
I too am disenchanted with the status quo and think perhaps the jackass has been braying for quite a while now. When will we learn. Excellent poem
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Date: 1/14/2016 3:34:00 PM
Hi Ahellas: you really epitomized our sign of the times in such an awesome satire. My compliments!
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Date: 1/14/2016 12:35:00 PM
So sad that wealth and power and greed are in fact a new breed death to those of love and peace and kind of soul. Where will people be. Powerful write
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Date: 6/11/2012 4:12:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:22:00 AM
Nicely worded theme of fear, ahellas
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:29:00 PM
How very true! We have a common enemy, that being wealth and power, and we allow ourselves to be duped into fighting each other instead over minutia.
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