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Fathers Day Surprise

'Twas a sunny Sunday in June Father's Day was in its throws We were just young children No money, but good at putting on shows I was the youngest of four My opinion meant it was a no no Especially when I suggested flour To make the carpet look like snow We were doing a pantomime Dressed up in all sorts of things I looked like an old bag lady Not sure what I wore for wings Well it went along nicely that was until when Someone trod on the cats tail You should have heard him yell As he ran up and down the curtain rail Pulling down our carefully chosen decorations The splinter of glass made us all cringe There was the vinegar from the pickled onions All over the carpet with red cabbage in the fringe The smell was horrendous, can't be denied the lounge looked like a hurricane had been unlocked My Tad loved his Father's Day surprise Mam didn't say much she is still shell shocked Penned June 1st 2014

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Date: 6/15/2014 7:38:00 PM
;) Welcome
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:39:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/12/2014 2:30:00 AM
Thanks Linda ...Seren
Date: 6/9/2014 11:13:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, seren
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Date: 6/9/2014 11:27:00 PM
Thank you Ram ...Seren
Date: 6/9/2014 9:06:00 PM
GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND! Congrats on your win!!!!!!
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Date: 6/9/2014 11:27:00 PM
LOL Thanks Robert.......Seren
Date: 6/9/2014 8:29:00 PM
I am sure he understands the love offering. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/9/2014 11:28:00 PM
lol the mess was horrendous I can remember, Thankyou for the congrats ...Seren
Date: 6/1/2014 8:30:00 PM
haha, what a fun story, Seren. By the way, you wrote Dad as Tad near the end of the poem. Was it a typo?
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Date: 6/1/2014 9:02:00 PM
No Andrea thought all would know by now that Tad is welsh for father.lol. Thanks for the comment... Seren
Date: 6/1/2014 3:52:00 AM
This is so cute and I am sure a very fond memory of your youth. I enjoyed the humor and could visualize the mess.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/9/2014 11:29:00 PM
Hi Connie Thanks for your comment ...Seren

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