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Fate Decides

When fate decides to bring you love then it's meant to be like a hand in glove. When you work all day with them on your mind all because their loving,faithful,and kind. When that one you love walks by your side with a love so strong it could hold back the tides. When you look that soul dead in the eyes and know your committed with no compromise. When this old world seems kinda small and the red wood trees don't seem as tall. When you just feel free like a southbound dove. That's a tell-tale sign fate brought you love. (when fate decides contest)

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Date: 10/3/2012 11:18:00 AM
This is lovely Dustin....congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Dustin. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem winning. Good write for this contest.
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Date: 9/30/2012 7:36:00 AM
Rots a ruck in the contest, my friend! It should do well... thanks for sharing!
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Date: 9/11/2012 9:11:00 AM
such positivity Dustin, what a joy to read....
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:33:00 PM
Dustin, i like your entry for this contest.. i love everything about love, the ups and downs. I also love the ending to your poem... the tell-tale sound... good luck~PD
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Dustin Self
Date: 9/10/2012 9:38:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/10/2012 9:25:00 PM
I liked your clever referencing of the red wood trees and the southbound dove!
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Dustin Self
Date: 9/10/2012 9:38:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/10/2012 9:24:00 PM
ok I found it. Under FATE. I should have figured that out!!! I think you did a good job. You followed the rules about not making it religious too. That is good. I see too many people doing religious ones and the judge said not to do that!
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