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Farm Walk

Looking out the barn door in our back yard I watched a deer run through our cow field, acting like cow pies were mine fields. He appeared not to like cows and seemed to plug his nose by lifting fat lips to block nostrils from smelling to much of what seemed too unpleasant for this fine beast. He kept on running lips flapping in the air making funny bubbly sounds, purposely or not, I'm not sure But one thing I do know for certain. This was the strangest deer I've ever seen. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.09.2014 For Shadow Hamilton's Contest Double Reverse Etheree 1st

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Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/4/2014 2:52:00 PM

Congrats on your lovely win,Brenda...Kudos to your ,great friend..

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 5:17:00 PM

Thanks Olusegun.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2014 1:58:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor, congrats on the win, Brenda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 5:16:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2014 11:35:00 PM

hahaha. this created an amazingly comical picture. The most entertaining one i have seen so far on the list. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 11:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I was giggling as I wrote it.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/3/2014 10:57:00 PM

love it, Brenda! made me smile :) congratulations!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 11:41:00 PM

Thanks Hija

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/3/2014 10:37:00 PM

Hehe it sounded quite a character, hope you see and write about this deer again...Seren

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 10:50:00 PM

You never know.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/3/2014 9:45:00 PM

Delightfully funny, Brenda, a mystery well-enough defined. Congrats on a curiosity of a deer in a cow field.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 9:51:00 PM

Thank you Reason. Glad you liked my humor.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/3/2014 8:58:00 PM

Sounds like a very snooty deer. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 9:27:00 PM

Thanks Joyce.

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/3/2014 8:03:00 PM

Great, Brenda. I am back home for a few days before packing a load to take to Florida to our new condo. I have a computer so maybe I can catch up some with my poetry soup friends. Congrats on your win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 8:05:00 PM

Thanks so much Faye. My sister is there for a while, as you know I'm grounded. Have a great time, it will be nice to see you around again.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/3/2014 6:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 7:55:00 PM

Thank you Maurice.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/3/2014 6:45:00 PM

I love this one, it has a beautiful flow.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/3/2014 6:26:00 PM

love the humour in this Brenda lovely pen congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/3/2014 6:29:00 PM

Thanks so much for this honor Shadow. I'm so glad you like it.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2014 5:57:00 PM

this made me smile Brenda many congrats on your top spot hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2014 9:40:00 AM

Wonderful portrayal of deer, Brenda

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/10/2014 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Mehta.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/10/2014 7:14:00 AM

Dear Brenda, I have enjoyed your poem for it so vividly portrays one of my favorite animals, the deer! Often I go up the mountains to watch deer and sometimes I come too close to them. Beautiful and vigorous writing!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/13/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Demetrius, and thanks for coming by.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/9/2014 8:13:00 PM

haha...Love this one Brenda...hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/9/2014 9:50:00 PM

Thanks Tim. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for stopping by.