Farewell My Child

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At Gateway yin Long sham temple Pink laced Taipei doll Sealed Carmine red lips Chiseled etched Fine porcelain From the four Corners horn Erected during monsoon Dragon tail rains Swept gale winds Funnel golden sand Through pearly whites That smile no more Slighting the whitest Pearl Ever Beautiful Lifeless love soul Dress eroded salty seas Passages are lingering.. Echoes

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Janet Eaton

Date: 2/8/2015 7:55:00 PM

Tonytocca this is so well written showing such sadness. Hugs to you. Janet

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 2/8/2015 8:15:00 PM

Janet,thank you for your support and kind words,it's greatly appreciated..much lov to you...tonytocaa ??

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2015 2:44:00 PM

such vibrant yet deep and sad imagery - incredibly descriptive write:-) hugs jan xx

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 2/6/2015 7:38:00 PM

Thank you jan,sometimes one has to mask the pain the hurt and write about others sadness..thank you for your kind and moving words?? tony