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Farewell

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For those I've lost but wept to keep, farewell... Sad One Line Contest Sponsored by Silent One 10/11/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Lynn Marie
Date: 9/22/2017 7:45:00 PM
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Beautifully sad Charlie. This would be a lovely dedication engraved on a plaque with a loved ones name, on a park bench overlooking the sea. So touching. a fave... I will be listening to 'Starry Starry Night' this weekend and looking forward to seeing more lyrics from you. Enjoy a happy, peaceful weekend Charlie xo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/23/2017 8:13:00 AM
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Thank you Lynn.
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 10/28/2016 2:54:00 PM
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Congratulations on your winning entry. Yes, "gold fish" as commony called, belong to the family of Carp, and they are edible, though said to be an acquired taste. Thanks for the stop by. / Maurice
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/28/2016 7:47:00 PM
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Thank you Maurice, always a pleasure to enjoy your humor...
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/21/2016 1:54:00 PM
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Deeply sad...which makes it even more beautiful, Charlie. I notice that this is a winning entry, so....congratulations! // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/28/2016 7:45:00 PM
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Thank you Paul...
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/13/2016 11:47:00 AM
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wow Charlie, so deep and profound..sadly beautiful congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/13/2016 1:15:00 PM
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Thank you LuLoo...
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Augustus Black
Date: 10/12/2016 8:11:00 PM
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Nice thought Sir. Congratulation.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/13/2016 1:15:00 PM
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Thank you Augustus...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/12/2016 1:36:00 PM
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A 7 for this profound one-liner, Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/13/2016 1:14:00 PM
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Thank you Janice...
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Dm Babbit
Date: 10/12/2016 11:32:00 AM
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Wow - so few words emit such strong depth and emotion. Congrats on your win. D
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/12/2016 12:56:00 PM
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Thank you DM...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2016 11:13:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/12/2016 12:55:00 PM
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Thank you Anne-Lise...
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Afzal Nusker
Date: 10/12/2016 11:10:00 AM
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Very touching and excellent sad one liner. Congrats, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/12/2016 12:54:00 PM
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Thank you Afzal...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/12/2016 2:48:00 AM
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- Agree with, Victor ..... beautiful and sad - Good luck in the contest, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 10/12/2016 7:29:00 AM
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Thank you Anne-Lise...

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