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Far Through Times

FAR THROUGH TIMES Moving on Moving far Far from pain Far from you You pierced my heart You tore apart Apart it cry Apart it bleed Bleed profusely Bleed until no more More to forego More to arise Arise living life again Arise laughing loud again Again a blossom prime Again a healthy rhyme Rhyme magnets warmth Rhyme striking hearts Hearts of diamonds Hearts of fire Fire dance Fire hope Hope ablaze Hope endless Endless thoughts Endless actions Actions moving man Actions moving souls Souls light Souls blessed Blessed by love Blessed of joy Joy for the world Joy to the world World growth World change Change views Change news News now News never Never gets old Never runs from battle Battle everyday Battle of all All walks of life All through times Times writing history Times with victory History... Times... (c) Olive Eloisa 2:10pm September 10, 2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/23/2014 4:07:00 AM

Olive, sweet, you are brilliant. Love.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/26/2015 8:24:00 AM

thanks much Rajat.. :) this is a late reply from me..

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/11/2014 9:10:00 PM

So well done Olive. Awesome Blitz.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/14/2014 3:04:00 AM

Thanks much Brenda..:) GBU

Paul Callus

Date: 9/11/2014 3:23:00 PM

Another new form, and you tackle it well. Fitting form for one who faces everyday battles! You persevere with learning and it shows heartening results. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/12/2014 10:18:00 AM

:) thanks much Paul.. I have been reading so many new forms.. But somehow I never one good topic or muse to go with it.. Somehow I see this theme fitting to the poetry type as well as the meaning of blitz.:) lol so this the product..:) thanks much..:) yes been facing so many battles but I'm really just so grateful that I did it with the grace of God..:)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/10/2014 1:40:00 PM

wonderful work. thank you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 11:30:00 AM

Thanks also..:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2014 1:21:00 PM

Interesting work..I need to look up Blitz and see what it is about..A new form ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 11:29:00 AM

Thanks much Sarah I appreciate your visit too..:)

Juli- Michelle

Date: 9/10/2014 10:10:00 AM

I love this! such wordplay!!! wonderful write, Olive :) Love, Juli-Michelle

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 2:13:00 AM

Thanks much Julie..:) I appreciate your drop by..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/10/2014 9:33:00 AM

The form attracts. I have yet not tried one, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 2:12:00 AM

Try it sir..:) it's quite challenging..:)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/10/2014 8:43:00 AM

Love the blitz Olive.... Hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 1:41:00 AM

Thanks much Tim..:) I appreciate it..:)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/10/2014 8:33:00 AM

Ive not seen this form very often. I like it and what you have done with it. Good! BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2014 1:37:00 AM

Thank you so much BG..:) I appreciate it..:) I first saw this in Debbie's blog and on the examples provided I read and read and tried to know this form..:) this now that I have found a topic for it..:) I hope I did justice to my topic though..

Wole Francis

Date: 9/10/2014 5:52:00 AM

This is creativity at work. you're very good and talented i have to confess.Lovely concept. cheerssss

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/10/2014 7:07:00 AM

Thanks much..:) GBU

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/10/2014 5:35:00 AM

beautifully written Dear olive..... Hope that you are going to be on the winning side of battle always... enjoyed reading it, such a smooth flow in your words.. god bless Friend always

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/10/2014 7:04:00 AM

Thanks much..:) I believe God is with me hence I'll trust that I'll be winning all life's battle..:) GBU