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Far Out

Fruit loops emerge from a neon psychedelic sea of crumbly waves Written on 8/2/2015 Picture #7 Colom Lune

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Mary Rotman

Date: 8/23/2015 4:25:00 PM

I used the same theme. I hope it worked out better for you, lol. I am fast becoming a fan.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/16/2015 11:05:00 PM

What a wonderful imagery Laura! Congrats on big win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/21/2015 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/16/2015 10:27:00 PM

You definitely thought outside the box for this one, Laura! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/21/2015 11:15:00 AM

The picture prompted the craziness, Kim! Thanks for your kind words :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2015 8:43:00 PM

wonderful win. PD

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/21/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thanks, Linda :)

Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 1:40:00 AM

laura, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/16/2015 3:34:00 PM

Thanks, Skat :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2015 7:29:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/15/2015 2:41:00 PM

Thanks, Jan :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/15/2015 7:14:00 AM

Ha, this was a great take on the prompt, grats on your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/15/2015 2:09:00 PM

Thanks, Casarah:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/15/2015 1:14:00 AM

this was SO COOL. It reminded me of one written by a hippy! The crumbly waves is what put you into the third place! Congrats.

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/15/2015 2:08:00 PM

Thanks for the placement, Andrea :) I'm so glad you like it!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/7/2015 6:14:00 AM

Hi Laura! I just had to go back and look up visual#7. I had no idea what it really was, but the lovely imagery of your Lune enlightened this semi-abstract picture. gl in the contest. // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/15/2015 2:42:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paul! I appreciate it :)

Paul Callus
Date: 8/15/2015 5:50:00 AM

And back again, Laura, this time with most deserved congratulations!:) Well done! ~ paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/3/2015 4:17:00 AM

I love your 2nd line!!! this one of choices actually!~Olive Eloisa

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/3/2015 3:13:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Olive :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2015 6:54:00 PM

beautiful imagery Laura - i had no idea what that image was even of - had to ask someone:-) lol good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Laura Leiser
Date: 8/3/2015 3:14:00 PM

The unusual picture intrigued me, Jan! Glad you liked this :)