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Fantasy Trip

When without umbrella it poured mind wandered how if it rained horizontally it would rain as a blanket above and not stagnate to breed bacteria no spoiling of leather shoes cow dung on road is waste but in farm is manure rain on road is not of much use in lake in farm its lifeline >^< When without flight tickets grounded at airport mind on fancy flight how if airports took off pick right corner as did in 'bombing' game corner would accomodate more than plane in emergency one would reach in time conveyor belts on airport is of less utility imagine conveyor belts in orbit and lift to reach orbit one would reach seeing angels on way >^< ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By Hitendra Mehta April 2011 For Members contest - Stream of Conciousness by Debbie Guzzi ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 5/1/2011 10:34:00 PM
Hey, you WON I just saw at the contest board. Way to go!!!
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Date: 4/30/2011 3:20:00 PM
Yes, it is very stream of consciousness, Hitendra. YOu have quite an imagination in this one!
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your big win Hitendra in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:08:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your amazing placement in Debbie's contest with this grandiose entry my friend.. hope all is well with u ... enjoy your masterful win for a tremendous write luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:28:00 AM
Dear Hitendra, I'm so happy to see your poem ranking high in this contest!!! Congratulations on a superb poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:41:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Hitendra
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:20:00 AM
many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/28/2011 1:42:00 AM
what a throbbing flight with matching sublime thoughts, hitendra.. big cheers for the shining win! :) hugggs
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Date: 4/27/2011 5:36:00 PM
Wonderful job, Hitendra.....well deserved win in Debbie's contest this is!! :)
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