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Fantasy Fish

/\ ///\\\\\ ///////\\\\\\ Conceived in the night in an ocean's cocoon, with chameleon, skin F and an instinct within, to melt, disappear, not to be seen. I You become part of the myth, ........ of my deep fantasies.. S You blend in the water, bending the rules of the norm. <@ H A wave of your tail, will gyrate your sails, under storms of the sea, F iridescent and free. Such an illusion you are, to the rational me. A Prowling shelves of a deep ocean, by the schemes of the moon N in a water ballet. You frolic around through the kelp, on a ray T I will pray, just to see you, that the light of your fun A will dazzle the eyes of the new morning sun! S /////////// Y ///////// /// ____________________________________________ 12/2/15 "Fantasy Fish In A Fantasy Ocean" Resubmitted for Skat's Contest: Premiere Contest: #14

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Date: 12/8/2015 8:47:00 PM
Wow! Great art in poetry too. Fascinated by this shape. Congratulations on your win in this contest. Rap.
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:22:00 PM
Wow, this is more than a poem, it is art!!! Well done!!!
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:24:00 PM
Carrie, you are so creative! The shape and the poem together are fantastic! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/7/2015 11:01:00 AM
a wonderful creation, congrats on your win
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Date: 12/7/2015 10:11:00 AM
amazing creativity :) Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 12/7/2015 8:23:00 AM
How did you do that?!!!!! :-0 That's amazing...... Congratulations for your beautiful WIN Carrie! ;-)
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:16:00 AM
How lovely Carrie.. congrats on fine win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations! Very different, well planned, creative.
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful win Carrie. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:21:00 AM
congrats on the win Carrie. Ingeniously created and well written.
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:12:00 AM
Congrats!!This is so amazing and very very clever! Well deserved win Carrie!! -lu *smiles*
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:07:00 AM
A charming entry, winning because of its uniqueness, Carrie. Julia, :)
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Date: 12/3/2015 2:51:00 PM
I really like this carrie....or should I say I Love them very....much like I Love my own....because something so Beautiful is shown....and it hones in on the inspiration I need....so I thank for this one and I hope we can proceed....;)
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Date: 12/2/2015 4:51:00 PM
Only you could have pulled this off...perfection is my opinion....just like its author......wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Carrie Richards
Date: 12/2/2015 5:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Judy !! This was a fun one to do! (I was suppose to be writing Christmas cards today!! lol !!)

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