Get Your Premium Membership

Family Love

I got family by my side that would never ever die I wanna find love to end my sorrow even if that means I will have to borrow just a little bit of love to end my grief O please tell me what to do sir priest The priest said not to worry my son your family loves you a ton Just keep your hand up and look around when ever you feel down just put your knees on the ground yours hands up high and pray to the sky! Your not alone my son!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/22/2016 10:15:00 PM
LUIS, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your awesome words today. ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2010 12:17:00 PM
that is a cool way to describe prayer, I like this. Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2010 11:33:00 AM
Glad you have your family!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2010 6:15:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Luis. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things