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False Senses

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False Senses

Do you realize that you lost? Do you realize that I won? Or did you think it was a tie In your sick twisted mind? Stuck in your lies Concrete at your feet You never took a step You never made a sound When the gun was fired And I ran for my life Do you realize that you lost? Battered and tossed By your own malfunction Wires you crossed Leaning on a crutch From wounds self inflicted Do you realize that I won? Running like fire Brighter than the sun Autumn behind my head Summer in my eyes So near the finish line The reward is mine Or did you think it was a tie? Tangled web behind your eyes Wrapped in delusions Coming to false conclusions In your sick twisted mind Do you realize that you lost? Do you realize that I won? Or did you think it was a tie In your sick twisted mind? Stuck in your lies Concrete at your feet You never took a step You never made a sound When the gun was fired And I ran for my life

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  1. Date: 5/3/2012 5:21:00 PM
    i. love. this. poem. need i say more? :D

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 2:27:00 PM
    Awesome poem!

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 8:28:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Sounds as perhaps something that Lucifer might have been saying to himself or other fallon angels as he and they were tumbling through the stars ˜ Love always, John!:) *