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Falling In Love

Dancing in his arms heart beating so fast feelings flood through me as he holds me close is he the one that in dreams was forecast? I act cool, he smiles knowing its a pose I smile back as he spins me round and round we sit and talk the way new lovers do to each other glad this love we have found happiness to both of us long overdue So in love although we recently met our life's before us laid at our feet The more we are together the less I fret when he kisses me it feels oh so sweet Passion rising overtaking us both to each other turning pledging a troth dedicated to my very best friend Lorraine and her new chap written 02/11/2014 contest: Any Poem#4

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Date: 4/22/2014 8:10:00 AM
Shadow Such a loving and passionate write. The devotion and care flows in each line so wonderfully. Thank you for the great comment on my Children's Book poem.
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Date: 2/16/2014 9:08:00 AM
truly very beautifully penned linda dear friend
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Date: 2/16/2014 10:19:00 AM
ty Liam very much appreciated hugs
Date: 2/12/2014 10:24:00 AM
Beautiful dedication, my lovely friend. A nice heartfelt poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 2/13/2014 7:39:00 AM
ty BL hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 10:40:00 PM
A great one Shadow, I really enjoy this celebration of affection.Kudos...
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:40:00 AM
ty Kayod5 so nice of you hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 6:42:00 PM
Beautifully penned write enjoyed it alot. Yes love can be a very special thing precious if you ask me I loved the emotion here cheri
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:39:00 AM
ty Cheri glad you enjoyed it hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 5:57:00 PM
This is beautiful, a very delightful write here my friend! I surely loved reading this incredible poem this evening! What a splendid heartfelt relationship! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:38:00 AM
hi Russell they are so happy it is so nice to see. ty for your wonderful comments most inspiring hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 2:55:00 PM
What an awesome story of new love so deeply felt! luv,Deb
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Date: 2/11/2014 3:15:00 PM
ty very much Deb hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 2:41:00 PM
This is beautiful Shadow..I adore new love...Hugs Tim
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Date: 2/11/2014 2:51:00 PM
ty Tim much appreciated hugs

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