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Falling From the Wall

FALLING FROM THE WALL air too rare tumbled but greeted ground cracked eggs smiled imagine sleeping sweet-- here in Humpty Dump V Anderson-Throop 2/9/2014

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Date: 2/21/2014 1:50:00 AM
So directly stated in a succinct way that I will say that you know yours emotions and how this accident carried you through the rest of your day... Well done Victoria... Verlena
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Date: 2/9/2014 8:40:00 PM
Dear Victoria: Simple yet profound piece. I think it has many layers in a simple fragment. Very hard to achieve but you captured the moment. Inspiring! Leon
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Date: 2/9/2014 11:39:00 AM
Victoria I like this a lot...David
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