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Falling From His Throne

I pushed my homework To stargaze with Kermit Frog toy… Angrily, he threw my moppet While I glared at this shadow, Plunging from an adored throne Like a villain. Posted by Carly Lalion, Nov 11, 2015 Contest:nette onclaud, Fallen In 25-30 words My father--- 29 words

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Date: 12/4/2015 9:36:00 PM
Wonderful write Carly.. congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/4/2015 8:10:00 PM
Carly, awesome win. SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 7:06:00 PM
YES, that is a great way to SHOW it!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 12/4/2015 6:29:00 PM
I like the use of shadow in this poem, very effective. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:34:00 PM
ohh, how sullen yet beautifully done, carly..sweet, fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs!
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Date: 12/4/2015 4:24:00 PM
oh this is sad Carly - do drop by my blog it has a wonderful muppet clip which may make you smile again:-) hugs Jan xx
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