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Falling Down

I'm falling falling ..falling down wonder when I'll hit the ground. The sky is clear not a cloud in sight, I feel like I should fight but nothing seems right. I straiten my body to slow my speed, twelve miles up it's hard to breath... nothing can help, it's no use to scream. Descending to my fate I realize it's never to late, and free myself of all the hate. The end is near I've nothing left to fear... the sound of the wind is all I hear. It rolls over my body like the waves upon the sand , only love shall fill these hands. It's almost time so I let go, I wonder whats beyond the great unknown. Will there be angels that sing so high, or only demons with blackness for eyes. So here I am falling falling to the ground, falling falling all the way down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2016 9:59:00 AM
destini everett, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 10/5/2012 3:07:00 AM
Nicely written Destini! Love the way you've described the falling and the underlying subtext. Nice!
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Date: 9/30/2012 10:13:00 AM
A belated warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Destini. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2012 11:13:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today!! keep writing..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 9/23/2012 3:20:00 PM
wonderful, bless you in your walk. love and God bless
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Date: 9/23/2012 6:51:00 AM
Such a good piece of Poetry...
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