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Falling (Song)

She's sleeping, she's dreaming, I watch her sleep the night away, I'm breathing, this peace in, Don't want to wake her right away, But the daylight, is coming, And she looks so beautiful to me, When she wakes up, she breaks up, The ways she wants her life to be, Alarm rings, the clock sings, And she opens up her eyes... Calling out, Knowing, I'm right here, To keep her from, Falling down, When she wakes up to what life is, She is sweet, and she's just, and she needs and she hugs And she watches out for who she loves, So I see That she's safe, and I create a place, She can wake and feel she's dreaming free, Falling back to me, She comes home, on her cellphone, ending another hectic day, She's sighing, starts crying, I wish I knew the words to say, I hold her, to show her, That everything will be okay, Still crying, she's trying, To push all of her stress away, I tell her, in this shelter, Nothing can stop her smile, from, Calling out, Knowing, I'm right here, To keep her from, Falling down, When she wakes up to what life is, She is sweet, and she's just, and she needs and she hugs And she watches out for who she loves, So I see That she's safe, and I create a place, She can wake and feel she's dreaming free, Falling back to me, Again, she starts sleeping, Heavy breathing, Sounds so sweet, To hear her slumber, Watch her wonder, Falling back to where she loves, I kiss her slowly, Her eyes open, Calling out and dreaming free, She's falling back to me...

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Date: 11/15/2010 1:25:00 PM
good work.....you got your own thing going....... do you play an instrument?
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Date: 11/3/2010 8:21:00 PM
This was a beautiful piece, you really captured the moment here, and the emotions as well. This was a great pleasure to read. wonderful work, i am seeing a great poet in you. --Madison
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Date: 10/30/2010 5:03:00 AM
Good Morning Andonus. To answer your question.....If you look at mine or another poets poem you will see beside the name of the poet an envelope and a steaming cup (SoupMail). You click on it to send them a Soupmail. Then to read your SoupMail if you look on the left side of page you will see Member Rrea in this box you will see My Soup Mail....click there to read your soupmail. You may have some already there. Love, Carol
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