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Fallen Angel

“Angels descending, bring from above, Echoes of mercy, whispers of love” Glory abounded, light that was rare Musical cherub now chained cold and bare, Created for greatness, glimmered and gleaned, Turned from the brightness, an Immortal machine, Arrogance and vanity destroyed by rebellion, Now a Fallen Angel, a force nolonger compelling, Redemption polluted, By views that were diluted, The original sin, To think you could win, It wasn’t enough to be right under success, You desired to be the ultimate best, Everlasting wounds with eternal demise, The most beautiful Angel now covered in lies, Magnificence lost, By the saviors cross, The lake of sweltering fire, Your new kingdom that has now transpired. By: Sabina Nicole Contest: Fallen Angel 2-12-12

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Date: 2/21/2012 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Tracie's~ "Fallen Angel" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:56:00 PM
wow, you really told it how it is for the fallen angels. VERY nicely done, Sabina. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:09:00 PM
congratulations!
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:22:00 PM
thank you, and you too:)
Date: 2/19/2012 1:05:00 PM
Congrats Sabina on your great win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:23:00 PM
thank you:)
Date: 2/19/2012 11:51:00 AM
Congrats Sabina on your win in Tracie's contest.Beautiful poem.
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:23:00 PM
Thank you very much:)
Date: 2/19/2012 11:14:00 AM
Sabina Nicole, first I wanted to say you have a beautiful name, I love it. Your work, here, is excellent. I really enjoyed it and congrats for placing on Tracie's winners list....................S.Ronthorpe
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed my poem:)
Date: 2/19/2012 7:17:00 AM
congrats Sabina on a fantastic win for wonderful words on fallen Angels luv.. amazing piece..
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:24:00 PM
Thank you and I hope you are doing well, in my heart and prayer oxox
Date: 2/19/2012 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations a smashing write a deserving win xx
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:26:00 PM
Thank you hun:)
Date: 2/12/2012 3:20:00 PM
Impressive write. The added poetic portion has no trouble fitting in with your work.
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:25:00 PM
Yea I guess your right, Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it:)
Date: 2/12/2012 3:15:00 PM
Nice... Good luck in the contest..always..pd
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:27:00 PM
thank you:)
Date: 2/12/2012 2:49:00 PM
very expressive ..good luck in the contest love,Deb
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Deb,:)
Date: 2/12/2012 2:47:00 PM
Beautiful rhyming, flow encourages the reader to go on.good luck in the contest with this wonderfully written piece
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 2/19/2012 6:26:00 PM
:)

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