Fall

an ember-colored leaf spirals gently onto the pond's skin

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Messoh Vincent

Date: 8/18/2016 12:53:00 AM

Wow, so great!!! I like the unique style and it fully serves the explosive quality of poetry.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/18/2016 4:02:00 AM

Thank you Messoh, for your kind comment!! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/22/2016 10:32:00 AM

This excellent one liner has served you well, Teddy! Another merited podium finish...well done...congratulations! // paul

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/25/2016 2:52:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul, for your kind applause!! :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2016 7:42:00 AM

One liners so unique are the ones upon the winners’ page..Glad to see you there..Congrats..Sara

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/20/2016 8:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sara!! *^_^*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2016 2:56:00 PM

this is the first one I am seeing on that list with outstanding imagery. though others have great messages,I LOVE this image in yours.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/19/2016 3:07:00 PM

WOW!!!! :-O Thank you so much, Andrea!! *^_^*

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/18/2016 2:59:00 PM

Hi Teddy, You painted a beautiful picture with a few words. Congrats on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 3:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis!! :-)

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/18/2016 10:32:00 AM

Such vivid imagery, I like it. Congrats Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 3:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunita!! *^_^*

Jesse Day

Date: 7/18/2016 12:05:00 AM

Congrats on your win in the One-Liner Contest! Jesse

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your applause, Jesse!! :-)

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/17/2016 9:13:00 PM

Lovely Teddy, congratulations ...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:26:00 AM

Thank you very much for your applause, Charlie!! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/17/2016 6:52:00 PM

Teddy, congrats on your placement in the one-liner contest! Sandra

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Tom Arnone

Date: 7/17/2016 6:24:00 PM

I really like that imagery. Congrats on your placement! :-)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom, for your applause and enjoying my piece!! :-)

Phillip Garcia

Date: 7/17/2016 5:54:00 PM

Very nice, love it

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Phillip!! :-)

Lu Loo

Date: 7/17/2016 5:43:00 PM

Teddy, wow, I love this!congrats on your placement in the one liner contest :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:20:00 AM

Hi Laura. Thank you so much for your sweet applause!! *^_^*

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2016 4:55:00 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on this awesome list of one line winners. Have a happy day **SKAT**

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2016 10:18:00 AM

Thanks so much for your kind applause, Skat!! *^_^* Have a happy day too!! *_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2016 7:32:00 PM

Teddy, you chose a really pretty one for this contest. Congrats for the win.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for your applause, Andrea!!! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2016 11:16:00 AM

I love the image you project, Teddy! Very deserving of a top placed win! Congratulations!! ~ Regards // paul

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul, for your applause!!! :-)

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/14/2016 11:07:00 AM

Beautiful win Teddy...

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Charlie!!! :-)

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/14/2016 7:40:00 AM

Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/15/2016 7:12:00 AM

Thank you so much BL!!! :-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2016 8:39:00 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/14/2016 4:22:00 AM

Lolest!!!! Ok Linda!!! ;-) Thank you so much for your sweet applause!!! *^_^*

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2016 8:11:00 PM

Love this.........."skin".....such a perfect word to polish this lovely image !! Congratulations!!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/14/2016 4:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Carrie!!! *^_^*

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/17/2016 9:44:00 PM

Hi Teddy, a beautiful Monoku from your heart, from your pen. Such a peaceful vision. A seven for this vision of peace....Vlad.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 4/1/2016 6:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Vlad. I'm greatly honored. :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:22:00 PM

a beauty.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 6:35:00 AM

Thanks Andrea! *^_^* <3

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 2:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan! *^_^*

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:29:00 AM

TEDDY, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT *8

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 3:52:00 AM

Thanks Skat! *^_^*

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/25/2016 7:12:00 AM

Poetic! Congrats on your well deserved placement, Teddy!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 3:51:00 AM

Thanks so much Balveen! :-)

James Inman

Date: 1/25/2016 7:01:00 AM

Great visual, Teddy.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 3:49:00 AM

Thank you so much James! :-)