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Fall

The wind is blowing, the leaves rustle in rhythm – fall is in the air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/22/2014 3:43:00 PM
Excellent word choice and overall clarity Like it... miken
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Veronica Andemariam
Date: 12/23/2014 4:09:00 AM
Thanks! I wrote it in my poetry class. :)
Date: 12/22/2014 1:47:00 AM
very clever haiku I love these forms where so few words say so much:-) Hugs jan xx
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Veronica Andemariam
Date: 12/23/2014 4:10:00 AM
Thank you Jan! :)
Date: 12/21/2014 8:52:00 PM
I like it -- good play on the word fall -- season and leaves are falling . . . very clever. A 7 rating from me.
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Veronica Andemariam
Date: 12/23/2014 4:11:00 AM
Why thank you David, I'm glad you enjoyed the read. :)

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