Fall

fall the cool air leaves fade orange and red thanks was said fall

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2009 9:17:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Autumn. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2009 2:09:00 PM

This is lovely, Autumn, and very similar in style to a cinquain. Indeed, we see the most beautiful colors when the days grow shorter. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 9/20/2009 12:55:00 PM

Hi Autumn Ah, so many beautiful memories within a season to give thanks for...A lovely sentiment. Have a wonderful day dear Autumn. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia