Fake

Honey let's go for a walk by the lake Cheating on me was your final mistake She pleaded and begged Put a rope on her leg Wouldn't go under I knew she was fake

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Darren White

Date: 2/13/2017 2:19:00 PM

Strange how men can get so intrigued by .... this ;)

Tim Smith
Date: 2/13/2017 2:21:00 PM

Lol

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/6/2016 8:10:00 PM

I'm told some say that hope floats//Easy with that pair of boats//Like tough alligator//Grab hold the inflator//Tow round the old castle moat!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/6/2016 8:12:00 PM

Lol...a sight for sore eyes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2016 2:17:00 PM

Lol... I knew you were evil... why are you trying to drown the unsinkable? Anyways, good one Tim... next time deflate....Linda

Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 3:29:00 PM

Thanks Linda....hope your advice wont be needee

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2016 10:34:00 AM

Haha! You are too good so no lady would do something like that to you! Hilarious dear, Tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 3:28:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/2/2016 10:06:00 PM

I'm not much on fake anything, especially tatas. Just really never understood the attraction. Funny limerick, I probably would have stuck a pin in them, like popping a balloon.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 3:27:00 PM

Im right with you.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/2/2016 4:48:00 PM

LOL great!!!! :)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 3:26:00 PM

Thanks Arthur

John Lawless

Date: 10/2/2016 2:44:00 PM

OK, Tim, you are hereby ordered to serve a four poem suspension for deflation.....Hell the Pats are getting their asses kicked by the Bills....go figure.....

Tim Smith
Date: 10/2/2016 2:57:00 PM

lol...You get Brady back next week.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/2/2016 2:16:00 PM

ha ha ha fabulous humour Tim and the pic with that inflatable football is perfect to go with the poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx7

Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2016 3:26:00 PM

I meant I really don't care...sorry missed that important word

Tim Smith
Date: 10/2/2016 2:20:00 PM

Thanks Jan...I really care for the "fake" type of person

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/2/2016 1:51:00 PM

Hee Hee...good one, Tim. Some people like fake...go figure! ;)

Tim Smith
Date: 10/2/2016 2:09:00 PM

I don't get why. I like woman how they are naturally.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/2/2016 1:37:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem Fake.I don't know if you made this poem up, or if this really happened to you. I enjoyed your poem.How do I write a List poem?

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/2/2016 9:10:00 PM

Thank you Tim I have the idea now how to write my poem later on.I'll do two poems before I do the list poem Thanks again for your help.I appreciate it.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/2/2016 1:47:00 PM

Thanks it is fiction. There is a forms section on the top. You can learn there.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/2/2016 1:25:00 PM

Lol : ) Really enjoyed reading this..Put a smile on my face.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/2/2016 1:35:00 PM

Thanks Charma...lol...inspired by the lake in neighbors yard from all the rain.