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Faith In Monsters

after my mother said good night she closed the door and turned out the light. perhaps by chance she didn't know the fright that awaited me as she closed the door. as it is this night and every night i need light more. to scare away monsters behind my closet door. what that monster is i have yet to see. but from movies snd scary stories i guess what it could be. Wolfman, Frankinstien, or Vampire all or Wicked Witch, ghostly ghoul to call. the undead Zombie scratching the walls. all i need is a little light, thats all! i cannot crack the curtans, i'm afraid of what i'll see. and in my mind i wonder why, oh why my mother won't believe me. when i say that there are monsters and one day that they will get me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/24/2009 2:30:00 PM
Great imagination. This would be fantastic at Halloween. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/13/2009 3:40:00 PM
John, I hope someone provides the light. You have provided the imagination! Love this work!
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Date: 2/12/2009 4:31:00 PM
Ouch....I always thought there was someone hiding under my bed...most likely spent the evening lurking in the closet.:( I'd drum up some courage and head off to my mom's bed. :) Strange how much scary stuff you can think of when it's dark. Nicely penned, John...smooth and depicts a scene that many can relate to. Blessings to you and yours...Love, Mikki
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Date: 2/3/2009 12:16:00 PM
Great write, John. I had a night light for a long time! Now, like Sharon, I read Stephan King! Enjoyed this very much! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:00:00 AM
This is awesome! Stephen King (one of my fav authors) would be proud! Yes, I was so terrified as a child at night, it was horrible. So many nightmares too. I guess too many Twilight Zones and other creepy movies/shows that I so loved! Great write! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/3/2009 9:34:00 AM
Haha, I like this one a lot, and I have a little brother who would definitely appreciate your point of view on the matter. Thanks for commenting on so many of my poems! Love always ~Jen~
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